Revising writing

I enjoyed this rewriting experience as the feedback Christelle gave was very constructive and positive, and I enjoyed reading it and was delighted that she enjoyed reading my blog. She said it read very well and flowed nicely and said they only this she would mention for future reference is that I should add a link to the website of the competition or the organization that was running it, Christelle also asked what my thought process was while deciding it to compete in the competition and if I have competed in other similar design competitions. It thought these were great things to include in my rewrite of the blog as it let me discuss more about the research, I did to come up with the design and how I originally heard about the competition and got to enter it in the first place. For this rewrite of the blog, I did not change much from the original just fixed a few grammatical errors that I missed in the first draft but what I did go was add more detail about the design and gave more context on why winning this competition was such a big deal for me not only as a graphic designer but personally too as I felt honoured to get the chance to work with such an amazing community.


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